Ponies by Kij Johnson
Two weeks ago, I read a short story review over at Carol's Notebook. The story was Ponies by Kij Johnson. It was nominated for the Nebula award and I can see why. Just reading Carols review of the story impacted me. Of course, I had to read Ponies for myself.
Barbara and Sunny got an invitation. They were so excited!
"You and your Pony ___[and Sunny’s name is handwritten here, in puffy letters]___ are invited to a cutting-out party with TheOtherGirls! If we like you, and if your Pony does okay, we’ll let you hang out with us."Sunny wants so badly to make friends with other ponies. It doesn't matter to him if his wings are cut off so he can't fly anymore, nor that his horn will be cut off too. He wants to be able to talk, socialize, and play. Barbara, wants be part of tTheOtherGirls. She will finally have friends.
TopGirl meets Barbara and Sunny at the party. The is a lot of entertainment there, including a live rock band.
"And then it’s time. TheOtherGirls and their silent Ponies collect in a ring around Barbara and Sunny. Barbara feels sick."
Ponies is a story about growing up and trying to fit in. This is a very short story, under 5 pages. However, it packs a BIG punch! It left my heart heavy and tears in my eyes. Highly recommended! You can read it here.

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Just the phrase "cutting out ceremony" is so provocative. Can't wait to read this.
John Mutford said... May 3, 2011 at 6:17 AM
I'm printing it out now. Can't wait to read it!
Loni said... May 3, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Isn't the ending heart-breaking?
Anonymous said... May 3, 2011 at 1:17 PM
John, I agree!
Teddy Rose said... May 3, 2011 at 9:29 PM
Loni, I hope you like it.
Teddy Rose said... May 3, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Carol, it was so heart breaking! I can't stop thinking about it.
Teddy Rose said... May 3, 2011 at 9:30 PM
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